JojotheJester's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tales of Stuff Episode 3]

Brilliantly written and looks inspired from some of my favorite Bullwinkle Cartoon styles which you executed flawlessly,Sounded great, voice acting was hilarious, everything was perfect! Well done....Well Done!

TalesofStuff responds:

Thank you so much!

[Warlord ofTongue Twisters]

Great work, proof that not all great flash hasto be 10 minutes of animation, your 1 minute or so of very clean style sat just fine with me, very well written and voiced excellent job :), the only criticism I have is that the mic had a little bit of feedback (white noise) so it could have been a little bit of a cleaner record but other than that it was great!

WooleyWorld responds:

I'm aware. Thanks for the feedback... (heh heh audio joke)
Glad you liked it.

[Delura EP 005.03]

Looks pretty damn good, but I havto say there doesnt seem to be much introduction to story of what the hell is going on, I found myself incredibly confused as to alot of things as to what I was looking at, even if this isn't the first flash (which I have no idea) you shouldn't expect the average viewer to know what is obviously alot of backround information you didnt display during this. Also the opening was very showey but I found myself wondering if the movie would ever start, you might want to concider maybe putting some dialogue or showing a character moving through those scenes to keep the average joe (me in this case) actually interested in watching it.

Thanks for sharing your work on Newgrounds and I hope you understand why I took the time to point these things out :)

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

Hmm, perhaps a concise "Previously on Delura..." that happens right after the intro segment should be something I could consider fairly soon in that case. Thanks for the suggestion and commentary!

[The Muffin Man]

A very creative twist on a childrens tale, I loved it! I especially got a kick out of the Car's License Plate "Carpe Muffin" rofl, very smooth animation style and excellent voice acting as well! Job Well done.

Gi-go responds:

Thanks very much :)

[Mustang Gets Off Of Work]

Great Voice Acting! all 3 characters were spot on and the animation was great! I had some realy good laughs on this one thank you for uploading, it made my day :)

JoeSimStudios responds:

I know it's not a lot in the grand scheme of things, but over 600 views in 8 hours for some unknown artist means a lot to ME. Thanks for all the kind words, guys, this animation took a lot out of me for the last week and the only thing that kept me going was being able to read reviews from you guys on Newgrounds. So in essence, you're all the only real reason I made this! (since my website is under construction, I don't have any kind of following yet, and the YouTube version only has 11 hits since I send most people here to check it out.)

[First Animation]

Amazing for a first run with flash! this is by far better than what I would usually see as someones first submission, you have obviously put some more time and work into it and for that reason alone it should stand to stay in eternal glory apon the grounds of new.

Couple of tips I could possibly give you are this:

Make sure you have a pre-loader, NG provides tons of them for free,
it plays on infinite loop, should have a replay button and stop once done playing through.
Even a few sound FX can brighten the entire thing and you can usually get them for free if you search long enough.

Art wize is not so much my field but I would say that some of it moves by a little too quickly for me to get a sense of what is going on, he opens a box and there is something inside it that makes him dissapointed? or the thing dissapears? its not realy quite clear.

All critique aside this is a very solid piece that shows you have artistic skills and can put them to use making something that is very watchable :)

- Cheers

Khoalazan responds:

I'm very interested in doing so :D but it is very expensive to obtain the materials that helped me accomplished this piece of animation

[Shuma VS Kaneda]

Very Promising

Pros: This definitely looks like something that could be very epic with more time spent on it, if you chose to do so I could easily see this getting front paged one day. You have some obvious animating/drawing skills already, that much is apparent.

Cons: Needs a pre-loader, pretty short loop cuts off abruptly

Sirogu-san responds:

Thank you for the pros and as for the cons..i knew i shoulda downloaded that preloader XD srsly though thanks

[Caps Lock RTF]

Good Animation, Lacks Sound

RELEASE THE FURYYYY AHHHHHHHHH

lol very decent animation, the only thing that bugged me was it was almost completely silent except for the talking and the keyboard typing noises at the beggining, even a hum or computer click noise when it was on his room would have brightened up the whole thing.

happyArtist94 responds:

yeah it was pretty quiet

[Paradox: Cat and Toast]

Toast loses

They actually proved on Mythbusters that toast does not show a preference either way on what side it drops, but this flash was awesomely made none the less.

GermanSoldierLock responds:

mythbusters is a p good show

[Ninja Kids X]

lacks movement

actually a surprisingly funny script, but it moved a little slowly at first, this would be a great flash if it was animated more, because all I saw was the same sprites with different backrounds, if you spent the time to make them move and maybe move the dialoge a bit faster you'd be set.

MAYORMCHEESE responds:

4!!!