Brilliantly written and looks inspired from some of my favorite Bullwinkle Cartoon styles which you executed flawlessly,Sounded great, voice acting was hilarious, everything was perfect! Well done....Well Done!
Thank you so much!
Great work, proof that not all great flash hasto be 10 minutes of animation, your 1 minute or so of very clean style sat just fine with me, very well written and voiced excellent job :), the only criticism I have is that the mic had a little bit of feedback (white noise) so it could have been a little bit of a cleaner record but other than that it was great!
I'm aware. Thanks for the feedback... (heh heh audio joke)
Glad you liked it.
I totally just watched your Mag-fest Q & A where you talked about a possible sequal to this, wheres the False Killer Whale Arin? WHERE IS IT!!!!
No, butt seriously.......dix
Looks pretty damn good, but I havto say there doesnt seem to be much introduction to story of what the hell is going on, I found myself incredibly confused as to alot of things as to what I was looking at, even if this isn't the first flash (which I have no idea) you shouldn't expect the average viewer to know what is obviously alot of backround information you didnt display during this. Also the opening was very showey but I found myself wondering if the movie would ever start, you might want to concider maybe putting some dialogue or showing a character moving through those scenes to keep the average joe (me in this case) actually interested in watching it.
Thanks for sharing your work on Newgrounds and I hope you understand why I took the time to point these things out :)
Hmm, perhaps a concise "Previously on Delura..." that happens right after the intro segment should be something I could consider fairly soon in that case. Thanks for the suggestion and commentary!
A very creative twist on a childrens tale, I loved it! I especially got a kick out of the Car's License Plate "Carpe Muffin" rofl, very smooth animation style and excellent voice acting as well! Job Well done.
Thanks very much :)
Happy Birthday Yotam!
You can do anything with your hands! Your comedic and artistic talent could take you in whatever direction you wanted, your Animations are always great for a good laugh when I come across them. Thanks for sharing them with us :)
Great Voice Acting! all 3 characters were spot on and the animation was great! I had some realy good laughs on this one thank you for uploading, it made my day :)
I know it's not a lot in the grand scheme of things, but over 600 views in 8 hours for some unknown artist means a lot to ME. Thanks for all the kind words, guys, this animation took a lot out of me for the last week and the only thing that kept me going was being able to read reviews from you guys on Newgrounds. So in essence, you're all the only real reason I made this! (since my website is under construction, I don't have any kind of following yet, and the YouTube version only has 11 hits since I send most people here to check it out.)
Amazing for a first run with flash! this is by far better than what I would usually see as someones first submission, you have obviously put some more time and work into it and for that reason alone it should stand to stay in eternal glory apon the grounds of new.
Couple of tips I could possibly give you are this:
Make sure you have a pre-loader, NG provides tons of them for free,
it plays on infinite loop, should have a replay button and stop once done playing through.
Even a few sound FX can brighten the entire thing and you can usually get them for free if you search long enough.
Art wize is not so much my field but I would say that some of it moves by a little too quickly for me to get a sense of what is going on, he opens a box and there is something inside it that makes him dissapointed? or the thing dissapears? its not realy quite clear.
All critique aside this is a very solid piece that shows you have artistic skills and can put them to use making something that is very watchable :)
I'm very interested in doing so :D but it is very expensive to obtain the materials that helped me accomplished this piece of animation
Great flash with good laughs!
I had a laugh at this, and well voiced and animated to boot! thanks for sharing this gem with us!
Clever and Funny
Your flashes never fail to Dissapoint, Yotam, thanks for the laugh made my day!
I love the randomness you always throw in!
Voice acting 10/10
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